"Spies (In My Head)"

This song is called “Spies (In My Head)”. I wrote it really, really quickly, possibly the fastest of anything I've ever written (I'd say it took about 6 minutes). Please tell me what you think!

Verse 1:
What the Hell are you talking about?
Is this the dream or am I incomplete?
I think I’ve lost all there is to lose,
But it can be rebuilt, twice as tall, as the mountains that laugh at us.

Pre-Chorus 1:
But Somewhere in between, the message got lost
Somewhere in between, it got intercepted,
And somebody changed it

Chorus 1:
And As the spies dance in my head
I won’t pretend I know
I won’t pretend I know
And they missed the switch this time
Stuck In between

Verse 2:
To all the world, let it be known
I am King, I am strong.
Stronger than man could ever dream to be
And I dare you to come up here, and see
 
Pre-Chorus 2:
Yet once again, the message gets lost
And once again, somebody told you that you could have hope
Somebody told you.

Chorus 2:
And as the spies danced in your head
Let’s not pretend, let’s not pretend
Let’s not pretend.
And it seems you missed the switch this time
Stuck in between

Bridge:
Everything I am,
Is pain and suffering
Mixed with the poise and grace
Of the giants
And their thousand trials

Everything I know,
Is the Gods
From their mountain tops
Laughing down at us,
And cracking the Earth we tread

Outro:
But I’m not afraid, I’ll build it twice as high.
I’m not afraid, I’m terrified
That I’m losing control.
If I ever had it at all.

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