Need help with the modes?

Parrelel modes? Relative modes? Pitch axis?
I'm pretentious enough to say I have tamed the modes, and would like to help my fellow musicians understand them as well.
I wrote a lesson, it's my first lesson ever so for you veterans out there PLEASE PLEASE review it and give me tips and critisism. It's being submitted for approval as we speak.

I hope I help and encourage instead of discourage.

btw here is my youtube for a sample of my knowledge put to use.
www.youtube.com/EstevanMusic :) "new album demo" is a good specimen.