lead riff

how does this sound......im gonna record myself playing it some time when im not lazy

 

  E5                                  C5                  A5      B5

            |-3-|                               |-3-|                    

E|------------------------------------------------------------------------|

B|------------------------------------------------------------------------|

G|------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D|----5---4~5-4-2---2-----5---4-2---2-----5---4~5-4-2---2-----5-2---1-4-1-|

A|--2---2---------5-----2---2-----5-----3---3---------5---0-3-----2-------|

E|0-------------------0---------------0-----------------------------------|

  x x   x             x x   x         x x                 x x     x

I played it on my guitar (I think I got the tempo right). I think it would sound better if you didn't have any palm mutes and no triplets. That would make it sound a bit progressive and give it a fuller sound. That's just my opinion. But you should give us a Guitar Pro or recording.

thanks for the feedback....just wondering did you hold the note before the triplet? its like [very]slightly longer than an 8th note

ill take your advice and see what it sounds like then ill let you know what i think

**UPDATE**

i played the way you said it darkriff....i love how it sounds. now ill use your way for an intro and my way for like a buildup kinda thing....thanks man